Monday, August 8, 2011

Puppy love :P




Don't come to my thoughts and haunt me please
I still don't understand what it is...

I am trying hard to calm my mind with peace
but i lose my control when i feel your breeze

Boy your eyes , they soothe me so much
I feel restless when you are not in touch

I feel totally amazed when i see your smile
Baby you make me forget everything for a while

We can never be together, cuz its tough to believe you
I like you so much that, i would never deceive you

I wished you were a dream and gone after the sun rise
My heart still don't agree to this, otherwise...


I wonder all the while, how long it would go.....
But I'm liking it and i want time to tick slow..


 Well I Don't damn care you fall in love with whomsoever
Would still pray you be happy forever......





---------------------------------------- My first Poem ---- please comment if you find grammar mistakes :D
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    Grammar lite but the feel of the poetry awesome :)

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  2. ashritkAugust 8, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    Super Like..:)

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  3. PradhanAbhishekCVGAugust 8, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    Well written lines... they speak out clearly what u feel... :)

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  4. And yo! it's shariAugust 8, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    it is good. dont bother about the grammer

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  5. vaishnaviAugust 9, 2011 at 4:10 AM

    Great poet is residing inside you gari darl.its really nice i liked it so much that you have posted what ever running in ur mind presently.:)

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  6. UnknownAugust 23, 2011 at 1:26 AM

    Great!!!!!

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  7. Kirk HammettOctober 12, 2011 at 1:22 AM

    The poem sounds good but I felt the following line contradictory :

    We can never be together, cuz its tough to believe you
    I like you so much that, i would never deceive you

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